{"id":3663,"date":"2017-02-21T12:58:58","date_gmt":"2017-02-21T11:58:58","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=3663"},"modified":"2017-02-21T12:58:58","modified_gmt":"2017-02-21T11:58:58","slug":"sympaticky-hrdina","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=3663","title":{"rendered":"Sympatick\u00fd hrdina"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/blog.enigma.sk\/2016\/08\/23\/sympaticky-hrdina\/\" target=\"_blank\"><em>Prv\u00fdkr\u00e1t zverejnen\u00e9 na www.enigma.sk 23. 8. 2016<\/em><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_3662\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\" style=\"width: 300px\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/02\/angel-1294925_640.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-3662\" src=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/02\/angel-1294925_640-300x224.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"224\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/02\/angel-1294925_640-300x224.png 300w, https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/02\/angel-1294925_640.png 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><p class=\"wp-caption-text\">Zdroj: <a href=\"https:\/\/pixabay.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Pixabay<\/a><\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"odsad\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">Raz som sledovala zauj\u00edmav\u00fa diskusiu. T\u00fdkala sa ot\u00e1zky, ako vytvori\u0165 sympatick\u00fa postavu. Spravi\u0165 nesympa\u0165\u00e1ka je toti\u017e \u013eahk\u00e9 \u2013 m\u00f4\u017eete na to zvoli\u0165 nejak\u00fa a\u017e zo <a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=1684\">\u0161iestich mnou op\u00edsan\u00fdch met\u00f3d<\/a>. Ale sympa\u0165\u00e1k je u\u017e trochu tvrd\u0161\u00ed orie\u0161ok. Nave\u013ea-nave\u013ea sa mi podarilo u mne sympatick\u00fdch post\u00e1v zozbiera\u0165 tieto spolo\u010dn\u00e9 znaky:<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>M\u00e1 nie\u010do d\u00f4le\u017eit\u00e9 spolo\u010dn\u00e9 s vami.<\/strong> V mojom pr\u00edpade so mnou. To je ale v\u0161eobecne ve\u013emi \u0165a\u017ek\u00fd bod, preto\u017ee netu\u0161\u00edte, kto bude t\u00fa kni\u017eku \u010d\u00edta\u0165. A ak sa chcete oh\u00e1\u0148a\u0165 <a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=692\">m\u00fdtom cie\u013eovej skupiny<\/a>, vedzte, \u017ee ani \u013eudia ur\u010dit\u00e9ho pohlavia, vzdelania \u010di veku nie s\u00fa arm\u00e1dou klonov. Napr\u00edklad nie ka\u017ed\u00e1 teenagerka je naivn\u00e1 blbka, ktor\u00e1 chce \u010d\u00edta\u0165 o tom, ako siv\u00e1 my\u0161ka pri\u0161la do novej \u0161koly a tam sa do nej zamiloval \u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u00fa\u017easn\u00fd chalan. Samozrejme, nech do knihy nap\u00ed\u0161ete \u010doko\u013evek, \u00faplne v\u0161etk\u00fdm teenagerk\u00e1m ani in\u00fdm \u010ditate\u013eom nevyhoviete. Ale to iste viete. N\u00e1m ide o to, aby sme ich do os\u00eddiel n\u00e1\u0161ho pr\u00edbehu zachytili \u010do najviac.<br \/>\nTak\u017ee, ke\u010f\u017ee nevieme, ak\u00e9 vlastnosti bud\u00fa ma\u0165 \u013eudia, \u010do bud\u00fa kni\u017eku \u010d\u00edta\u0165, postava by jednoducho mala ma\u0165 t\u00fdch vlastnost\u00ed \u010do najviac a v\u00e4\u010d\u0161ina \u010ditate\u013eov si u\u017e nie\u010do vyberie. Nasekan\u00edm kopy inform\u00e1ci\u00ed o postave z\u00e1rove\u0148 spln\u00edte aj parameter, aby bola prepracovan\u00e1 a d\u00fdchala \u017eivotom. Ale pozor! Jej vlastnosti nesm\u00fa by\u0165 nah\u00e1dzan\u00e9 lopatou na kopu, ale v harmonickom celku. Ak m\u00e1 teda postava nejak\u00e9 ve\u013emi rozdielne vlastnosti, \u010ditate\u013e mus\u00ed ch\u00e1pa\u0165, ako sa na ne hrdina pozer\u00e1, ako si t\u00fato nekonzistenciu s\u00e1m vysvet\u013euje. V opa\u010dnom pr\u00edpade dostanete namiesto sympa\u0165\u00e1ka neuverite\u013en\u00e9 \u010dudo.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul style=\"text-align: justify;\">\n<li><strong>Dostato\u010dne trp\u00ed.<\/strong> Toto je ve\u013emi d\u00f4le\u017eit\u00fd bod. E\u0161te d\u00f4le\u017eitej\u0161\u00ed ne\u017e predo\u0161l\u00fd. Darmo bude hrdina presnou k\u00f3piou \u010ditate\u013ea, ke\u010f mu nem\u00e1te v \u010dom dr\u017ea\u0165 palce. Mne sympatick\u00e1 postava mus\u00ed v \u017eivote trpie\u0165 minim\u00e1lne tak ako ja. A \u010d\u00edm je jej utrpenie v\u00e4\u010d\u0161ie, t\u00fdm viac som ochotn\u00e1 pri\u017em\u00fari\u0165 o\u010di nad odli\u0161nos\u0165ami medzi \u0148ou a mnou a tie\u017e nad jej chybami. Takto svojim obetiam z\u00edskava sympatie <a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=1527\">G. R. R. Martin<\/a>. Viacer\u00e9 z jeho post\u00e1v za\u010d\u00ednali ako pekn\u00ed hajzl\u00edci, ktor\u00fdm som \u017eelala nie\u010do zl\u00e9, ale ke\u010f sa im toho nepekn\u00e9ho u\u0161lo viac ne\u017e posta\u010dovalo na n\u00e1pravu charakteru, zrazu som im \u00fapenlivo \u017eelala happyend.<br \/>\nNesta\u010d\u00ed v\u0161ak sucho seka\u0165 katastrofy, ktor\u00fdmi hrdina prech\u00e1dza \u013eahostajne \u010di s \u00fasmevom na tv\u00e1ri. Va\u0161a postava mus\u00ed tie katastrofy dostato\u010dne pre\u017e\u00edva\u0165. Mus\u00edte opisova\u0165, ako sa pri nich c\u00edti. Ako sa boj\u00ed. Ako si z\u00fafa. Ako h\u013ead\u00e1 rie\u0161enie. Ako bolestne spom\u00edna na lep\u0161ie \u010dasy. Ak toti\u017e dlh\u0161iu dobu netrp\u00ed postava, za\u010dne trpie\u0165 \u010ditate\u013e.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul style=\"text-align: justify;\">\n<li><strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=2499\">Ch\u00e1pete<\/a> jeho konanie.<\/strong> Na prv\u00fd poh\u013ead sa zd\u00e1, \u017ee tento bod automaticky funguje vtedy, ak je naplnen\u00fd prv\u00fd, ale nemus\u00ed to tak by\u0165. V\u010faka dobre op\u00edsan\u00e9mu mysleniu a c\u00edteniu postavy m\u00f4\u017eete sympatizova\u0165 aj s niek\u00fdm, kto s vami nem\u00e1 spolo\u010dn\u00e9 absol\u00fatne ni\u010d, a naopak, hrdina sa m\u00f4\u017ee zo za\u010diatku javi\u0165 ako v\u00e1\u0161 dvojn\u00edk, a aj tak to nepom\u00f4\u017ee, ak nevid\u00edte pr\u00ed\u010diny jeho (ne)konania. A dokonca, pokia\u013e sa \u010ditate\u013e stoto\u017en\u00ed s hrdinom, ale s\u00fa\u010dasne nerozumie jeho spr\u00e1vaniu, postava mu bude e\u0161te nesympatickej\u0161ia ne\u017e keby sa s \u0148ou nestoto\u017enil. Preto\u017ee ak sa s \u0148ou \u010ditate\u013e nestoto\u017en\u00ed, m\u00f4\u017ee nepochopenie hodi\u0165 pr\u00e1ve na odli\u0161nosti. Je norm\u00e1lne, ak sa neviete vc\u00edti\u0165 do odli\u0161n\u00fdch \u013eud\u00ed. Ale ak sa niekto v\u00e1m podobn\u00fd, komu ste spo\u010diatku rozumeli, za\u010dne spr\u00e1va\u0165 \u0161ialene, bol\u00ed to o to viac. Z tohto d\u00f4vodu je preto nebezpe\u010dn\u00e9 da\u0165 kladn\u00e9mu hrdinovi vlastnosti, ktor\u00e9 vy sami nem\u00e1te, a ani im nerozumiete. Preto\u017ee \u010ditate\u013e tie vlastnosti m\u00f4\u017ee ma\u0165 a bude vedie\u0165, \u017ee tak\u00fdto \u010dlovek v skuto\u010dnosti <a href=\"http:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=3087\">uva\u017euje \u00faplne inak<\/a>.<br \/>\nNepochopenie d\u00f4le\u017eit\u00e9ho rozhodnutia postavy u m\u0148a zab\u00edja sympatie ve\u013emi \u010dasto. Obzvl\u00e1\u0161\u0165 mi nejd\u00fa do hlavy tie pr\u00edpady, ke\u010f je postava v nejakom mal\u00e9ri a nevid\u00ed pred sebou jasn\u00e9 rie\u0161enie. Chce sa mi na \u0148u kri\u010da\u0165, \u010di je na\u010disto sprost\u00e1, \u017ee nevysk\u00fa\u0161a alebo aspo\u0148 nezv\u00e1\u017ei tak\u00fa jasn\u00fa mo\u017enos\u0165. Preto si mysl\u00edm, \u017ee rad\u0161ej viac zd\u00f4vod\u0148ovania konania ako prim\u00e1lo. Odhaleniu v\u00fdchod\u00edsk, na ktor\u00e9 autor s\u00e1m nepr\u00edde, m\u00f4\u017ee ve\u013emi pom\u00f4c\u0165 betareading.<br \/>\nSamozrejme, treba pozna\u0165 spr\u00e1vnu mieru. S\u00fa rozhodnutia a reakcie nato\u013eko vlastn\u00e9 v\u00e4\u010d\u0161ine \u013eud\u00ed, \u017ee sa v nich netreba \u0161prta\u0165. Je napr\u00edklad prirodzen\u00e9, ke\u010f matka chce zachr\u00e1ni\u0165 vlastn\u00e9 die\u0165a. Ak v\u0161ak matka vlastn\u00e9 die\u0165a zabije, potrebujete ve\u013emi dobr\u00e9 zd\u00f4vodnenie jej konania, ak m\u00e1 zosta\u0165 sympatickou.<br \/>\n\u010castej\u0161ie m\u00e1vam probl\u00e9m s pochopen\u00edm \u017eensk\u00fdch post\u00e1v ako mu\u017esk\u00fdch. Tie mnohokr\u00e1t robia nelogick\u00e9 obraty a rozhodnutia. A to bez oh\u013eadu na to, \u010di je ich autorom mu\u017e alebo \u017eena. Tipujem, \u017ee ak je to mu\u017e, obrat v spr\u00e1van\u00ed svojej hrdinky si zd\u00f4vod\u0148uje \u201e\u017eenskou logikou\u201c \u010di hormon\u00e1lnymi zmenami sp\u00f4soben\u00fdmi men\u0161trua\u010dn\u00fdm cyklom. Ak je to \u017eena, nenap\u00ed\u0161e d\u00f4vod, lebo si zrejme pomysl\u00ed: v\u0161ak my, diev\u010dat\u00e1, vieme. Len\u017ee ja veru neviem. Aspo\u0148 zop\u00e1r viet na vysvetlenie by fakt neu\u0161kodilo.<br \/>\n\u010co e\u0161te m\u00f4\u017eete urobi\u0165 pre zv\u00fd\u0161enie pochopenia? Zariadi\u0165, aby reakcie postavy neboli v rozpore s jej osobnos\u0165ou. To zna\u010d\u00ed, \u017ee ak raz nap\u00ed\u0161ete, \u017ee hrdina nezn\u00e1\u0161a \u017eeny, tak nem\u00f4\u017eete s\u00fa\u010dasne nap\u00edsa\u0165, \u017ee h\u013ead\u00e1 \u017eenu na trval\u00fd a l\u00e1skypln\u00fd vz\u0165ah. A ak to tak mus\u00ed by\u0165, lebo si to vy\u017eaduje dej, potom by u\u017e malo pr\u00eds\u0165 zd\u00f4vodnenie \u2013 napr\u00edklad to, \u017ee podvedome po \u017eene t\u00fa\u017ei, no nejak\u00e1 trauma na\u0161tartovala v jeho vedom\u00ed nen\u00e1vistn\u00fd vzorec, a tento rozpor ho ni\u010d\u00ed. Alebo \u017ee t\u00fa nen\u00e1vis\u0165 k \u017een\u00e1m v skuto\u010dnosti len hr\u00e1, lebo&#8230; dopl\u0148te si nejak\u00e9 lebo.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>M\u00e1 spomienky.<\/strong> Na z\u00e1ver tento zauj\u00edmav\u00fd a najmenej samozrejm\u00fd bod. Pri\u0161la som na\u0148 intenz\u00edvnym prem\u00fd\u0161\u013ean\u00edm, \u010do maj\u00fa e\u0161te spolo\u010dn\u00e9 mne sympatick\u00e9 postavy od rozli\u010dn\u00fdch autorov a \u010do naopak ch\u00fdba v\u0161etk\u00fdm nesympatick\u00fdm. Zistila som, \u017ee spomienky s\u00fa pre m\u0148a ve\u013emi d\u00f4le\u017eit\u00e9. Ale pozor, nemysl\u00edm t\u00fdm spomienky na nie\u010do, \u010do postava za\u017eila predt\u00fdm, ne\u017e sa s \u0148ou \u010ditate\u013e na\u017eivo stretne, takzvan\u00e9 retrospekt\u00edvy. Aj tie m\u00f4\u017eu sympati\u00e1m ve\u013emi pom\u00f4c\u0165, no e\u0161te v\u00e4\u010d\u0161iu silu maj\u00fa pre m\u0148a spomienky na nie\u010do, \u010do postava pre\u017eila v samotnom deji. \u010co za\u017eila spolo\u010dne s \u010ditate\u013eom.<br \/>\nIst\u00fa logiku to m\u00e1. Spom\u00ednanie na spolo\u010dne pre\u017eit\u00e9 pod\u013ea v\u00fdskumov utu\u017euje aj re\u00e1lne vz\u0165ahy. Tak pre\u010do by nemohlo tie, ktor\u00e9 maj\u00fa \u010ditatelia s postavami? Fakt nem\u00e1m rada, ak autor vl\u00e1\u010di zo situ\u00e1cie do situ\u00e1cie hrdinu s pam\u00e4\u0165ou d\u00e1\u017e\u010fovky. Ak si postava nevie z\u00e1\u017eitky zapam\u00e4ta\u0165, sp\u00e4tne nad nimi prem\u00fd\u0161\u013ea\u0165 a na z\u00e1klade toho sa vyv\u00edja\u0165, pripad\u00e1 mi akoko\u013evek ak\u010dn\u00fd dej zbyto\u010dn\u00fd. Samozrejme, aj toto s mierou, spom\u00ednanie by nemalo \u00eds\u0165 na \u00fakor akcie a deja. Ale pravideln\u00e9 z\u00e1blesky spomienok dod\u00e1vaj\u00fa hrdinom v mojich o\u010diach neuverite\u013en\u00fd \u0161mrnc.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p class=\"odsad\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">V\u0161imnite si, \u017ee v\u00f4bec nespom\u00ednam, \u017ee sympatick\u00fd hrdina mus\u00ed by\u0165 bezchybn\u00fd \u010dlovek a opl\u00fdva\u0165 sam\u00fdmi heroick\u00fdmi vlastnos\u0165ami, ako je stato\u010dnos\u0165, sebaobetavos\u0165, skromnos\u0165 a podobn\u00e9 kecy. Naopak, prebytok t\u00fdchto vlastnost\u00ed u m\u0148a v niektor\u00fdch pr\u00edpadoch sympatie \u00faplne zahlu\u0161il. Samozrejme, \u017ee kladn\u00fd hrdina v sebe mus\u00ed ma\u0165 nie\u010do dobr\u00e9. No \u010ditate\u013e sa nemus\u00ed stoto\u017eni\u0165 pr\u00e1ve s t\u00fdm dobr\u00fdm v \u0148om. Pokojne nech n\u00e1jde v postave aj temnej\u0161iu str\u00e1nku svojej osobnosti. Naopak, pri plochom a neod\u00f4vodnenom anjelovi hroz\u00ed, \u017ee sa \u010ditate\u013e nebude ma\u0165 s \u010d\u00edm stoto\u017eni\u0165, lebo tak\u00fd \u00fa\u017easn\u00fd v re\u00e1li nie je nikto.<\/p>\n<p class=\"odsad\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">Ak v\u0161ak chcete \u00eds\u0165 cestou \u00faspe\u0161n\u00e9ho braku, bezchybn\u00fd hrdina m\u00f4\u017ee by\u0165 jednou z mo\u017enost\u00ed, preto\u017ee v nieko\u013ek\u00fdch brakov\u00fdch bestselleroch, ktor\u00e9 som pre\u010d\u00edtala, to takto na in\u00fdch \u010ditate\u013eov funguje. Niektor\u00fdm jednoduch\u0161\u00edm \u013eu\u010fom asi sta\u010d\u00ed vidie\u0165 v knihe \u013eud\u00ed, ak\u00fdmi by chceli by\u0165, nie tak\u00fdch, ak\u00fdmi s\u00fa oni sami. Pre m\u0148a v\u0161ak s\u00fastavne kladn\u00e9 myslenie nem\u00e1 \u017eiadnu logiku a pri \u010d\u00edtan\u00ed m\u00e1m preto sk\u00f4r pocit, \u017ee m\u00e1m do\u010dinenia s pom\u00e4tencom ako so sympa\u0165\u00e1kom.<\/p>\n<p>Skr\u00e1tka, vytvori\u0165 kla\u010fasa je \u0165a\u017ek\u00e9. Ako napokon v\u0161etko v p\u00edsan\u00ed.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Prv\u00fdkr\u00e1t zverejnen\u00e9 na www.enigma.sk 23. 8. 2016 &nbsp; Raz som sledovala zauj\u00edmav\u00fa diskusiu. T\u00fdkala sa ot\u00e1zky, ako vytvori\u0165 sympatick\u00fa postavu. Spravi\u0165 nesympa\u0165\u00e1ka je toti\u017e \u013eahk\u00e9 \u2013 m\u00f4\u017eete na to zvoli\u0165 nejak\u00fa a\u017e zo \u0161iestich mnou op\u00edsan\u00fdch met\u00f3d. Ale sympa\u0165\u00e1k je u\u017e trochu tvrd\u0161\u00ed orie\u0161ok. Nave\u013ea-nave\u013ea sa mi podarilo u mne sympatick\u00fdch post\u00e1v zozbiera\u0165 tieto spolo\u010dn\u00e9<span class=\"more-excerpt\"><a class=\"more-excerpt-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/?page_id=3663\"> (pokra&#269;ova&#357; v &#269;&iacute;tan&iacute;&#8230;)  <\/a><\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":64,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/3663"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=3663"}],"version-history":[{"count":15,"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/3663\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3678,"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/3663\/revisions\/3678"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/64"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.adhara.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=3663"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}